You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the
proportion
of the population aged 65 years
and over in three different countries, including the USA
, Sweden
, and Japan
from 1940 to 2040.
Overall
, it is evident that all countries
proportions increased significantly throughout the Change noun form
country's
countries'
years
, with Japan
at the highest percentage and the USA
the
lowest. Change preposition
at the
Sweden
and Japan
were relatively similar in values at the end
of the time period.
In 1940, the USA
had the highest number of population in this
proportion
, with just below 10%, followed by Sweden
just
over 5%. The lowest Change preposition
with just
proportion
that year was seen in Japan
at approximately 5%. The USA
and Sweden
slightly began increasing the following year, but Japan
began gradually decreasing.
The USA
reached a peak in 1980, contributing to around 15% of the population proportion
next was Sweden
just under 15% during the same period of time. In contrast
, Japan
began plateauing throughout the period from 1960 till the end of the 1980's
. Fix apostrophe usage
1980s
However
, it began increasing in the succeeding years
, reaching well above 25% at the beginning of 2040. Additionally
, Sweden
and Japan
continued to rise marginally in the following years
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