You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the
proportion
of the population aged 65
years
and over in three different countries, including the
USA
,
Sweden
, and
Japan
from 1940 to 2040.
Overall
, it is evident that all
countries
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proportions increased significantly throughout the
years
, with
Japan
at the highest percentage and the
USA
the
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lowest.
Sweden
and
Japan
were relatively similar in values
at the end
of the time period. In 1940, the
USA
had the highest number of population in
this
proportion
, with just below 10%, followed by
Sweden
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over 5%. The lowest
proportion
that year was seen in
Japan
at approximately 5%. The
USA
and
Sweden
slightly began increasing the following year, but
Japan
began gradually decreasing. The
USA
reached a peak in 1980, contributing to around 15% of the population
proportion
next was
Sweden
just under 15% during the same period of time.
In contrast
,
Japan
began plateauing throughout the period from 1960 till the end of the
1980's
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1980s
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.
However
, it began increasing in the succeeding
years
, reaching well above 25% at the beginning of 2040.
Additionally
,
Sweden
and
Japan
continued to rise marginally in the following
years
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • population aged 65 and over
  • trends
  • upward trend
  • significant increase
  • decrease
  • specific points in time
  • starting point
  • ending points
  • highest proportion
  • lowest proportion
  • given period
  • timeline
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