The graph below gives information about international tourist arrival in different parts of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrates the foreign visitors
count
in various regions across the world Verb problem
apply
such
as North America
, central and eastern Europe, south-east Asia, sub-Saharan Africa, and South America
over a period
of fifteen years i.e., from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
, it is clear that
the international tourist visits were increased over the period
in all the listed areas.However
, the northern and the southern parts of America
were listed to be the highest and the least visiting
places respectively.
In the year 1990, about 70 Replace the word
visited
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
overseas visitors Change preposition
apply
were
arrived in North Unnecessary verb
apply
America
, making it the highest tourist spot. Their number
was augmented over time and by the year 2000, it was raised by 20Change to singular
million
millions
and remained in a plateau till the end of the period
. In contrast
, South America
, in spite of its doubled international tourist visits which were only one-seventh of the North American visitors initially
, remained to be the region with the least number
of guests.
Moreover
, the same trend was seen in the case of sub-Saharan African travellers but they were ahead of South America
by about 5 millions
. Change to singular
million
In addition
, the European visitiors
were about three times of South American tourists. They were maximised during the decade and at Correct your spelling
visitors
last
Add a comma
last,
was
identical to North Correct subject-verb agreement
were
America
. Furthermore
, the south-eastern part of Asia had double
the Wrong verb form
doubled
number
of South American vistors
at the beginning of the Correct your spelling
visitors
period
and finally
they were about 50 Add a comma
finally,
millions
in Change to singular
million
number
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