The following bar graph compares the age profiles of male and female cinema goers in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females who did physical

workout

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workouts

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regularly in various age groups in 2010.

Overall

,

it is clear that

men aged between 15 and 24

years

old and women aged between 45 and 54

years

old dominated the percentage of individuals who did regular workouts in each gender.

According to

the data, men whose

age

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ages

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ranged between 15 and 24

years

old were

the

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in the

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highest category in terms of doing physical workouts, at 52.8%.

Furthermore

,

this

was followed by the elder males aged 65

years

old and above and those whose ages ranged between 55 to 64

years

old, at 46.7% and 45.1%, respectively. Meanwhile, men aged between 25 to 34

years

old, 35 to 44

years

old, and 45 to 54

years

old were below 45% each.

In contrast

, those

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ranged

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between 45 and 54

years

old were the highest category for females, at 53.3% and those aged between 55 to 64

years

old came as the second position at only 0.3% lower than them. Youngsters who were 35 to 44

years

old, between 25 to 34

years

old, and between 15 to 24

years

old,

followed

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at 52.5%, 48.9%,

47.7

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and 47.7

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%, consecutively. The elders aged 65

years

old and above were registered as the lowest rate in females, at 47.1%.