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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, amd planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, amd planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are two maps. One of the maps shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and the other shows the planned future development in the town of Norbiton.
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, as you can see obviously, on the
second
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map
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, there is a bridge on the river compared to the
second
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map
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. And it is noticeable that there are a lot of factories on the first
map
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whereas
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, it can be seen there are any kinds of factories on the
second
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map
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. On the
second
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map
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, the bridge will be constructed on the river in the future and the Circle Road will be expanded to the north as well.
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, plenty of factories were replaced houses and there are shops, a medical centre, a playground and a school near Circle Road. To summarise, it seems that someone has planned to turn an industrial area in the town of Norbiton into a residential area and a school district as well.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words second, map with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • current condition
  • proposed future development
  • primarily
  • lining the roads
  • flowing from west to east
  • northern border
  • residential area
  • housing units
  • replace the factories
  • infrastructure
  • new bridge
  • connecting
  • creation of a park
  • expansion
  • community-friendly environment
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