The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart demonstrates the usage of different screens
such
as mobiles, laptops, tablets, computer desktops, TVs with flat screen
and conventional Fix the agreement mistake
screens
TV
by the Fix the agreement mistake
TVs
middle age
group people of Canada to view television Correct your spelling
middle-aged
programmes
in the years 2009 and 2019.
Overall
, it is clear that
the
television Correct article usage
apply
programmes
were mostly watched through conventional TVs initially
, later they were replaced by televisions with flat screens. However
, the usage of mobile phones and tablets was
increased. Verb problem
has
In contrast
, laptops and desktop computers were reported with minimal usage.
In the year 2009, most of the Canadians preferred following TV
programmes
on traditional screens, who were about 34% whereas
only 5% viewed in tabs. The laptop and mobile viewers were four and three times of
the tablet screen watchers respectively.Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, only 8% of the population used flat screned
televisions. The other 18% of the citizens used Correct your spelling
flat-screen
computer's
Change noun form
computer
desktop
.
With regards to the year 2019, the followers of Fix the agreement mistake
desktops
TV
programmes
watching through ancient TV
screen
were just about one-ninth of the initial viewers Fix the agreement mistake
screens
whereas
the tablet users were rised
by four times. Correct your spelling
raised
risen
In contrast
, laptop and desktop users were reduced and remained at 12% each. The canadians
watching Change the capitalization
Canadians
flat screened
TVs were augmented by three times. Add a hyphen
flat-screened
In addition
, mobile phone userd
were Correct your spelling
users
used
icreased
by 11%.Correct your spelling
increased
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