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The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart demonstrates the usage of different screens
such
 as mobiles, laptops, tablets, computer desktops, TVs with flat
screen
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screens
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 and conventional
TV
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TVs
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 by the
middle age
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middle-aged
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 group people of Canada to view television
programmes
 in the years 2009 and 2019.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
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television
programmes
 were mostly watched through conventional TVs
initially
, later they were replaced by televisions with flat screens.
However
, the usage of mobile phones and tablets
was
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 increased.
In contrast
, laptops and desktop computers were reported with minimal usage. In the year 2009, most of the Canadians preferred following
TV
programmes
 on traditional screens, who were about 34%
whereas
 only 5% viewed in tabs. The laptop and mobile viewers were four and three times
of
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the tablet screen watchers respectively.
Moreover
, only 8% of the population used
flat screned
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flat-screen
 televisions. The other 18% of the citizens used
computer's
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computer
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desktop
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desktops
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. With regards to the year 2019, the followers of
TV
programmes
 watching through ancient
TV
screen
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screens
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 were just about one-ninth of the initial viewers
whereas
 the tablet users were
rised
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raised
risen
 by four times.
In contrast
, laptop and desktop users were reduced and remained at 12% each. The
canadians
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Canadians
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 watching
flat screened
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flat-screened
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 TVs were augmented by three times.
In addition
, mobile phone
userd
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users
used
 were
icreased
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increased
 by 11%.
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