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It is important for people to tale risk, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks overweigh the disadvantages?

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It has been believed that
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risk taking
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 is significant in both lives, personal
as well as
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 professional. Some believe that risky decisions bring more opportunities and increase self-esteem,
while
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 others argue that it can lead to financial
crisis
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 and
harmful
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for
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 mental health. In my opinion,
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 has more downsides, which outweigh the upsides of it. It is undeniable that the possibility of facing financial problems is quite high, when
people
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 take
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risk
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risks
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, especially in
business
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.
This
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 is because
people
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 make predictions about
future
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the future
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, which can be either positive or negative.
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, one wrong
move
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 with
risk
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 at work can cause money problems.
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, these troubles can be a reason
of
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bad
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the bad
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 mental health of an individual, who is responsible
uncalculative
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move
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.
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,
people
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 suffer from depression and brain issues.
For instance
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, a famous
businessmanof
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businessman of
businessman
 India, Suraj Dadlani had to face bankruptcy when he
choose
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 to go with a decision which was based on predictions. Eventually, he
become
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 a patient of mental health and lost his everything, family and
business
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.
On the other hand
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,
risk
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 brings a lot of new and exciting opportunities in the lives of individuals. Many
people
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 think
tht
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that
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 not take
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risk
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risks
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 in
business
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then
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 they are basically saying no to
business
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 and causing a loss.
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, if they pursue
with
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risk
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, they still have
50
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a 50
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%
chances
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chance
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 of failing which still can cause loss to
business
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.
That is
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 why, either
ways
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 individuals are getting the same results with
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risk taking
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, which is loss.
Apart from
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this
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,
people
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 think that taking hard risky decisions can increase their confidence and make them feel fearful in life. But, it can all be crushed into pieces after making a risky
move
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 and
then
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 failing. In conclusion,
although
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 individuals have more options after going with
risk
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, it is appropriate to take
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move
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 to save themselves from financial and mental crisis.
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, I believe the disadvantages of
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risk taking
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 clearly
outweighs
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 its advantages.
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