Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is the case? What can governments do to help the amount of rubbish produced?
It is true that increased
consumerism
has led to higher waste
production as people buy and discard items more frequently. There are a variety of reasons for this
, but steps can definitely be taken tackle
the problem.
Fix the infinitive
to tackle
To begin
with that, modern lifestyle is one of the major reasons to produce many waste
and garbage in these days. This
lifestyle,
encourages Remove the comma
apply
community
to buy too much and consume more than they need in their lives. Add an article
the community
In other words
, the individuals in the current century have taken more distance from the culture of consumerism
. For instance
, if something breaks like a mobile phone, we throw it away and buy a new one. Secondly
, the other issue that the statistic of waste
production has escalated, is advertising. The companies with
use advertising to sell their products and they know that the community Change preposition
apply
encourage
by advertisements to buy more than their daily consumption.
The Community do not think about Wrong verb form
is encouraged
consequences
of producing rubbish. The governments teach and conduct local educational workshops for individuals Correct article usage
the consequences
to
how to make less Change preposition
on
waste
and change their consumerism
model. Additionally
, the national and local authorities impose
the companies to reuse suitable and useful materials on their products. Verb problem
force
For example
, the factors that produce electronic devices like cellphones or laptops,
can use Remove the comma
apply
of
old devices that Change preposition
apply
public
use or throw them to build new and more Correct article usage
the public
up to date
machines or appliances.
In conclusion, today’s society has turned to garbage more than before. But the governments by cultivation, correction of the people’s lifestyles and Add a hyphen
up-to-date
also
with a regular and detailed planning in the field of consumerism
can reduce the produced garbage.Submitted by abphobos70 on
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coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas more clearly by dividing them into distinct paragraphs, each dealing with one main idea. This will improve readability and ensure a logical progression of ideas.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples and data to support your points. For instance, citing statistics on the increase in waste production or specific government initiatives that have successfully reduced waste in other regions can make your argument stronger.
task achievement
Avoid general statements and focus on explaining your points in more detail. Clarify how the suggested government initiatives would practically work and affect waste production.
task achievement
The essay addresses both parts of the question, identifying the reasons for increased rubbish production and suggesting government actions to mitigate it.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion effectively outline and summarize the main points of the essay, providing a clear framework.
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