Write a letter to this neighbour. In your letter •Explain the problem •Suggest a solution •Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve

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Hello Mr. Singh, I hope

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letter finds you well! I am writing

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letter to express my concerns about the predicament faced

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a week now. We

are

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living together

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two months, but never experienced any

problem

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However

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from

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past

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the past

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week now, every night after ten, loud music is played the whole night which

interrupt

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interrupts

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my sleep and it

became

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has become

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difficult to get up in the morning for work.

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, children need to go to school early morning, which impacts their schedule. I wanted to rectify

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matter, as

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always been a supportive neighbour, I wanted to advise you to keep the music in low volume at night. So, that we can all live in a peaceful environment. Once in a

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is not a topic of concern, but make sure to take permission. I hope you will understand the issue I am dealing

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now. If not resolved, I may need to take strict action and complain to

Police

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the Police

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about

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matter. Ans moving forward it will break the peace and positivity in

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apply

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society. I hope you rectify

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issue and Thanks for your time. Yours Lovingly, Harshit

harshitkaur321Fri Jul 19 2024

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single idea per paragraph

Ensure that your paragraphs have a clear main idea. For instance, separate the explanation of the problem and the proposed solutions into distinct paragraphs.

complete response

Clarify the exact consequences you will take if the problem persists. This can strengthen the seriousness of your letter.

suitable writing tone

Consider using more polite and indirect language when suggesting solutions, especially when addressing a neighbor.

complete response

The letter contains all the necessary components: explanation of the problem, a suggested solution, and an indication of future actions if the problem is not resolved.

greeting and closing

The salutation and closing are appropriately respectful and neighborly, maintaining a pleasant tone.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

193 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to express my concern about...
It has come to my attention that...
This issue has been causing...
One potential solution could be...
I would kindly suggest that you...
If the situation does not improve, I will have no choice but to...
I hope we can resolve this matter amicably.
Thank you for your understanding.
Your cooperation in this matter would be greatly appreciated.

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Write a letter to this neighbour. In your letter •Explain the problem •Suggest a solution •Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve

In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

More and more people today are spending large amounts of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Because of the negative effects on health of an inactive lifestyle, all university students and school children should be forced to do sports activities at least 3 times per week. Do you agree?