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Write a letter to this neighbour. In your letter •Explain the problem •Suggest a solution •Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve

#neighbour #•explain #•suggest #•say #action #situation
Hello Mr. Singh, I hope
this
 letter finds you well! I am writing
this
 letter to express my concerns about the predicament faced
from
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 a week now. We
are
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have been
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 living together
from
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 two months, but never experienced any
problem
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.
However
,
from
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past
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the past
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 week now, every night after ten, loud music is played the whole night which
interrupt
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interrupts
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 my sleep and it
became
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has become
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 difficult to get up in the morning for work.
Also
, children need to go to school early morning, which impacts their schedule. I wanted to rectify
this
 matter, as
you
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 always been a supportive neighbour, I wanted to advise you to keep the music in low volume at night. So, that we can all live in a peaceful environment. Once in a
while
 is not a topic of concern, but make sure to take permission. I hope you will understand the issue I am dealing
right
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 now. If not resolved, I may need to take strict action and complain to
Police
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the Police
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 about
this
 matter. Ans moving forward it will break the peace and positivity in
the
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society. I hope you rectify
this
 issue and Thanks for your time. Yours Lovingly, Harshit
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure that your paragraphs have a clear main idea. For instance, separate the explanation of the problem and the proposed solutions into distinct paragraphs.
complete response
Clarify the exact consequences you will take if the problem persists. This can strengthen the seriousness of your letter.
suitable writing tone
Consider using more polite and indirect language when suggesting solutions, especially when addressing a neighbor.
complete response
The letter contains all the necessary components: explanation of the problem, a suggested solution, and an indication of future actions if the problem is not resolved.
greeting and closing
The salutation and closing are appropriately respectful and neighborly, maintaining a pleasant tone.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to express my concern about...
  • It has come to my attention that...
  • This issue has been causing...
  • One potential solution could be...
  • I would kindly suggest that you...
  • If the situation does not improve, I will have no choice but to...
  • I hope we can resolve this matter amicably.
  • Thank you for your understanding.
  • Your cooperation in this matter would be greatly appreciated.
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