The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the yearly revenue of language-related jobs in five cities. The units of measurement are given in
dollars
.
Overall
, the the interpreter's
income
was the highest of all despite
of
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it
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having an equal
income
in some countries.
Additionally
,
translator
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also
witnessed
same
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amount of money collected in some parts of the city. Language teacher was variant in different cities.
Also
, some cities had low
income
levels
while
others had high
level
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of
income
.
Firstly
, Mexico had the lowest figures as far as all the languages were concerned all were below 20000
dollars
. In Dubai, interpreters and language teachers had an equal number of 60000
dollars
as well as
Toronto which had an estimate of 650000
dollars
.
Moreover
, in Paris,
same
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number of nearly 650000
dollars
on
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the interpreter and translator was noted and
finally
, in
Munich
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Munich,
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figures
of
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the three languages varied.
That is
interpreters, translators and language teachers had 75000, 65000 and 60000 respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars, income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • languages-related jobs
  • US dollars
  • five cities
  • highest income
  • lowest income
  • average income
  • significantly higher
  • second highest
  • one-fourth
  • gradual increase
  • variations
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