The bar graph shows the annual number of rides taken on two forms of public transportation in the city of Williamsville between 2016 to 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates males and females, who received average salaries on a weekly basis and worked in various departments in the year 2020.
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that the higher salary received by the Linking Words
men
in all professions in the same year. Use synonyms
Whereas
females received more pay in professional occupations as compared to other jobs. Both Linking Words
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and Use synonyms
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received the lowest Use synonyms
payment
in manual labour occupations.
It is conspicuous that for Use synonyms
men
pay was $2000 in 2020 and it was highest among all the categories in both genders. The minimum Use synonyms
payment
received by the Use synonyms
men
in manual labourers, where these employees received $1100 per Use synonyms
week
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.
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In addition
, professionals occupation paid the highest salary by employers; it was $2000 every Linking Words
week
in 2020 and administrative/ clerical workers, service workers and technicians were higher than Use synonyms
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apply
women
.
Probing ahead, it can be experienced in the same year girls received the maximum Use synonyms
payment
in the professionals' category $1900 per Use synonyms
week
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
women
got lessened Use synonyms
payment
of $850 in manual labourers jobs. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the maximum salary per Linking Words
week
got by girls is $1900 in professional occupations. So in all categories, ladies received less as compared to Use synonyms
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. Companies showed more interest in Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, payment, week with synonyms.
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