The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts illustrate the percentages of men's and women's
employment
in countries around 2005 and 2015.
In 2005, in Canada, male employment
was around 60% whereas
women were under 40%. This
rate indicates that there are more male employees
than females. In South Korea, the percentage of male workers rated 76% of the employees
, on the other hand
, the percentage of female workers is mostly around 30% of the time. Sweden is where most of the male employment
increases ranging to 79%, where the female is only under 50%.
In 2015 the number of men and female employment
is still the same. In Canada, there are mostly only male employees
than females, but it does seem like it hasn't changed much. South Korean female employees
decrease greatly, while
the men'sSubmitted by riani.the2 on
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