The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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outlines the

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uses

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in an Australian household

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the second

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highlights the percentage of

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gasses

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gas

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emmisions

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emissions

produced by Australians.

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, cooking and

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uses

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the least amount of

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for only 5%.

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water heating, heating and cooling,

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other

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appliances

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uses

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more than 20% of

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and

is

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regarded as the top three most used

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in households. Refrigeration and lightning only

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12% and 11% of

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in the Australian household. From the second

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, we can highlight that the most production of

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gas is coming from heating and cooling, with an abrupt data of 38%.

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water heating and other

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takes

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up 25% and 16%, and cooking,

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, lightning, and refrigeration, only

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up to a total of 21%

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. In the

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chart

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, other

appliances

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takes

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the

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place for using the most

energy

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,

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other

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, in the second

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takes

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the third position, with heating and cooling taking the

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place for producing the most

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gasses. The least

energy

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consuming

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in the

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chart

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is outlined by

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and

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contributes the least to

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emissions.