The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The average

household

energy

use

in Australia is shown in the

first

chart

, the second

chart

shows the resulting gas

emmissions

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emissions

from the

energy

use

as shown in the

first

chart

. Other appliances make up the most in

energy

use

with 24%, after that comes water heating with 23%. On the other side of the spectrum, cooking and

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makes

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up the least with only 5%.

Household

energy

use

does not correlate directly to the greenhouse gas production from said

energy

. We can see that other appliances

does

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not make up the most production with only 16%. Compared to heating and cooling

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apply

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makes up the most with 38% even though it only landed third on the

first

chart

making up 20% of

the

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household

energy

use

.

Stand by

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makes up the lowest percentage in both

charts

, indicating a consistent link present in the

charts

. It is important to note that

while

both

charts

don't seem to correlate perfectly as seen in the

first

comparison between the two

charts

, it does show a somewhat loose connection with both

charts

showing similar percentages in each category. In

conclusion

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these

charts

illustrate the usage of

household

energy

in Australia and how it somewhat

corellates

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correlates

correlated

to the production of greenhouse gasses by category.