The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented table demonstrates data about the percentage of students who attended four Secondary
School
Types in 3 various years( 2000, 2005,and 2009).
It is obvious the best school
that had a large number was Voluntary- controlled
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a voluntary-controlled
school
in the initial years, but in the last
year the community
school
was the best one
. In addition
, it is crucial that the figure of all institutes except community
schools
increased.
According to
the chart, the main school
which people chose was Voluntary- controlled schools
, falling enormously trend, at the beginning had 52%; however
, finally
, reached 20%. The second one
was Grammar schools
, which had 24% in 2000; moreover
, this
motivation was the same as the first one
; as a result
, in 2009 the proportion of it was half of what in 2000.
The graph illustrates the amount of Specialist schools
was equal to the proportion of community
schools
at 12%. community
schools
had jump significant direction and hit 58 per cent in 2009; nevertheless
, another one
went down slightly to 10% in 2009.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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