The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and maire comparisons where refevant.
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The two charts illustrate the changes in the ownership of electrical gadgets and the quantity
time
spent on housework in a specific country from 1920 to 2019.
Change preposition
of time
Overall
, as percentage
of Correct article usage
the percentage
family
with electronics including washing Fix the agreement mistake
families
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
, experiences an increase, number of time of housework per Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
week
decreases. It can be shown that two diagrams one related inversely.
In first
40 years, Correct article usage
the first
refrigerator
significantly rose to 90% from having no user almost, Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
while
washing machine
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
machines
cleaner
gradually grew to 60% and 50% from 40% and 30%, Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
increased
by Wrong verb form
increasing
same
Change the article
a same
the same
number of
percentage. Correct quantifier usage
apply
Furthermore
, refrigerator
climbed to Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
the
around 75% in 2019, despite Correct article usage
apply
the
slight fall of 5% between 1950 to 1980z For others, Correct article usage
a
vacuumed
and washing Wrong verb form
vacuuming
machine
remained rising to Fix the agreement mistake
machines
last
year of Correct article usage
the last
this
period and, in 2019, most people had those devices for their home, in 2019, in percentage
of 100.
In 1920, households spent about 50 hours per Add an article
the percentage
week
on housework. This
number steadily decreased over the years, dropping to around 20 hours per week
by 1960 and continuing to decline to approximately 10 hours per week
by 2019.Submitted by sodoo on
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Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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