The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the divorce percentage rates in
Finland
and Sweden from the start of 2011 to the end of 2015.
From the overall
data, it is seen that Sweden outnumbered Finland
in the percentage ratio. The only year that Finland
had the highest ratio rate
was 2015.
With regards to the nation Sweden, the highest elevation rate
was in the year 2012 with almost 50 percent
growth. As we can see from the chart, apart from the year 2011, the percentage ratio Change the spelling
per cent
decreases
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decreased
as
going forward through the years and it Change preposition
apply
reaches
a level of 38 Wrong verb form
reached
percent
in 2015.
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per cent
Secondly
, the nation Finland
depicts a gradual increase in the divorce rate
as per the data.
In conclusion, it is seen that the divorce rate
is much higher in Finland
throughout the years.Submitted by akashjoseph88 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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