The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country.
The chart below compares the number of films that were released and the number of tickets sold for
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between 1996 and 2006 in a state.
Overall
, during these two different
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the percentage of cinema ticket sales for films related to comedy remained
23
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% in 2006 and 20% in 1996. In the first
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it is seen that
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drama
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the drama
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created on average 30%
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but ticket sales
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far less with 15%,
while
fantasy and romance spent about as much as each other.
However
, by 2006 sold less than was released. The gap in spending between these two graphs had widened and considerably more money was spent
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comedy than
others
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. As can be seen from the graph, the amount of money spent increased in all four statements in 2006 but rose the most dramatically in comedy,
as well as
the period between 1996 and 2006 saw
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lowest index only in romance was lower than
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in 1996
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for
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3%.
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