The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum duringthe year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visitduring the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum duringthe year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visitduring the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
Two given pie charts provide information about how visitors are satisfied a
year
before refurbishment and after one
year
.
Overall
, it can be seen that in both tables the majority of people were dissatisfied or very dissatisfied.
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period prior to the refurbishment, about thirty per cent were very dissatisfied, and forty per cent were dissatisfied,
while
after a
year
the number of very dissatisfied increased by ten per cent, and the number of dissatisfied guests went down by half. As can be seen, in both tables the number of satisfied people who visited the Ashdown Museum was visibly lower than others, and the percentage even went up twice after refurbishment. The statistic of visitors, who didn't respond, hasn't changed, and stayed the same
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both times. The only percentage that increased dramatically was the total of visitors who were very satisfied. The numbers skyrocketed from fifteen to thirty-five in just one
year
.
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