The pie charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Oman and Spain in 2005 and projections for 2055. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The two pie charts illustrate, the proportions of the different
age
categories of citizens from Oman
and Spain
in the Year 2005 and their predicted values after 5 decades from that
Overal
, Correct your spelling
Overall
while
Oman
had the lowest amount of people in 15
-59 Correct article usage
the 15
arange
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range
Spain
had the lowest from youngest
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the youngest
group
moreover
it is clear that
in both countries adults are most
common Correct article usage
the most
age
group
.
A glance at the pie charts revelas
that in 2005, the two Correct your spelling
reveals
reveal
age
categories of below 14 years
and above 60 years
were the same in Oman
which accounted 48
% for each. Change preposition
for 48
Similarly
, the lowest reported proportion of 4% was presented as 15
- 59 year range. Correct article usage
a 15
On the other hand
, when considering the Spanish population, about 14% of the total population were
the youngest Correct subject-verb agreement
was
group
. In addition
, the
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apply
middle aged
people were the Add a hyphen
middle-aged
secondly
most common Change the word
second
age
category in Spain
, which is nearly twice as much of
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as
the
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apply
youngers
and it is just Correct your spelling
younger
a
half of the percentage of the same Correct article usage
apply
age
in Oman
.In the means of the eldest group
, it has
a significant difference from Verb problem
is
Oman
having 62%.
When the forecasted values are considered, in Oman
,the density of the elders are
expected to have Change the verb form
is
slight
increase Correct article usage
a slight
by
5% than which was Change preposition
of
in
2005. Change preposition
to
Although
the second eldest group
will remain constant for 50 years
, youngest
range will be reduced by 11% during that period.Correct article usage
the youngest
Finally
, in 2055 Spain
will reduce the elder's
concentration by 16% from its value 50 Replace the word
elderly's
years
ago. Despite the doubling of the amount
of people from the Change the quantifier
number
middle aged
category, kid's percentage will Add a hyphen
middle-aged
be remained
still in the same value as it Change to the active voice
remain
have remained
is
in 2005.Wrong verb form
was
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