the graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The given chart provides
the
information regarding the transportation of products in the UK by four different means from 1974 to 2002. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, there was an upward trend observed in all the mentioned methods, with the most significant rise was seen in the number of goods delivered via roadways.
In 1974, roadways carried the highest number of good
transported in the UK, recording approximately 70 Fix the agreement mistake
goods
million
tonnes
,as opposed to that of pipeline, with below 10 mllion
Correct your spelling
million
tonnes
delivered. The number of products transported on boats (approximately 40%) and on trains (40%) was almost the same. Coming to 1994, although
seeing some fluctuation, the figure for road transportation rose to above 80 million
tonnes
, while
that of waterways increased significantly by around 20 million
tonnes
in 1990 and levelling
off there for 4 years. Wrong verb form
levelled
Although
remained the lowest, pipeline witness
a steady increase to reach 20 Wrong verb form
witnessed
million
from 1974 to 2 decades later.
After 1994, there was a slight drop in the data on cargo shipped on road
until around 1996, Add an article
the road
where
it reached a nadir of below 80 Correct word choice
when
million
, then
it rose again to almost 100 in 2002. The same pattern was experienced by both water transportation and railway, which reached above 60 million
and approximately 40 million
, respectively, in 2002. Finally
, the figure for pipeline
reached the highest point of above 20 Fix the agreement mistake
pipelines
million
then
plateaued there until 2002.Submitted by kimtruong270192 on
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