The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives information about the percentage and prediction of the 3 continents and the whole
world
of the population
in the urban area from 1950 to 2030.
Overall
Latin
America have
the highest figures Change the verb form
has
of
Change preposition
for
people
while
other
2 continents which are Africa and Asia are the same as the whole Correct article usage
the other
world
in terms of number
of urban residents.
At first glance , Change the article
a number
the number
Latin
America had just under %40
Change preposition
of 40
population
in the year 1950 and it dramatically increased %by 70 in 2000 Latin
American people
will be soaring by %80 by the time 2030. Populations
of Africa and Asia are similar to each other because they had the smallest percentage almost 10 in 1950 after that they grew five times in the year 2000in addition both 2 continents will have around %50 urban Correct article usage
The populations
people
by 2030. The whole world
was average population
of urban people
with %30 in 1950 after that it almost doubled to approximately %50 and forecast that the world
is going to have %60 urban people
by the year 2030.
Finally
, the most dense population
will be Latin
America in 2030 whereas
the urban people
of Africa will not significantly increase within the next decades.Submitted by kickbox191 on
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