The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information about the percentage and prediction of the 3 continents and the whole
world
of the
population
in the urban area from 1950 to 2030.
Overall
Latin
America
have
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the highest figures
of
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for
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people
while
other
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the other
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2 continents which are Africa and Asia are the same as the whole
world
in terms of
number
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a number
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of urban residents. At first glance ,
Latin
America had just under %
40
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of 40
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population
in the year 1950 and it dramatically increased %by 70 in 2000
Latin
American
people
will be soaring by %80 by the time 2030.
Populations
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The populations
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of Africa and Asia are similar to each other because they had the smallest percentage almost 10 in 1950 after that they grew five times in the year 2000in addition both 2 continents will have around %50 urban
people
by 2030. The whole
world
was average
population
of urban
people
with %30 in 1950 after that it almost doubled to approximately %50 and forecast that the
world
is going to have %60 urban
people
by the year 2030.
Finally
, the most dense
population
will be
Latin
America in 2030
whereas
the urban
people
of Africa will not significantly increase within the next decades.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, population, latin, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban population
  • future predictions
  • historical data
  • urbanization trends
  • rates of growth
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • economic development
  • migration
  • government policies
  • upward trend
  • pace of urbanization
  • catching up
  • comparative analysis
  • regional differences
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