You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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Today I will happily summarise the information in the following maps , I want to start with a comparison between the school in 1985 and the school now
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I want to address the most standing difference which is the school population as we can see there is a huge jump it used to be 1500 students back in 1985 but now it has grown up by 800 students that are really noticeable other than the schools' population , we have the difference in the playing fields it used to be way bigger back in 1985 but now it is smaller but that change was for a wise reason because they made the playing fields smaller so they can fit a brand new pool and a fitness centre which so the idea of making the playing fields smaller wasn't a bad idea after all. Lastly
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of the report, I hope that everything was clear to everyone thank you.Submitted by alaanoudaltammaami on
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