You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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Today I will happily summarise the information in the following maps , I want to start with a comparison between the school in 1985 and the school now
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I want to address the most standing difference which is the school population as we can see there is a huge jump it used to be 1500 students back in 1985 but now it has grown up by 800 students that are really noticeable other than the schools' population , we have the difference in the playing fields it used to be way bigger back in 1985 but now it is smaller but that change was for a wise reason because they made the playing fields smaller so they can fit a brand new pool and a fitness centre which so the idea of making the playing fields smaller wasn't a bad idea after all.
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Lastly
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at the end
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of the report, I hope that everything was clear to everyone thank you.
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