You travelled on plane some days back lost your bag. Though you field your claim to Lost and Found department you have not received your bag. In your letter - write the details of incident - inquire the status of your lost bag to airline - tell what you want if the bag is not found
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am
writithis
Correct your spelling
writing
Correct determiner usage
this letterbto
letterbto
draw your immediate attention Correct your spelling
letter to
about
my Change preposition
to
complain
.
I travel Replace the word
complaint
through
Mumbai to Torontobby Change preposition
from
yoir
airline on 1st JulyCorrect your spelling
your
,
2024. My PNR Is 1266EJ. Remove the comma
apply
However
, I reqched
Correct your spelling
arrived
on
the Toronto airport on time and Change preposition
at
waiting
for my bagvat Wrong verb form
waited
caroused
. I waited for 30 minutes but Verb problem
arrive
afterthat
I realised whether my Correct your spelling
after that
bag
is
lost or misplaced. Wrong verb form
was
Thus
, I sudden
went to the "Lost and Found " department and registered my Change the word
suddenly
complain
.
I want to let you know that my Replace the word
complaint
bag
was in red colour and it was a
American Tourister trolley Change the article
an
bag
.
Moreover
, on the upper side handle
there was a blue colour tag with my name and contact number. Add a comma
handle,
Therefore
, you can easily found
it and Wrong verb form
find
recognised
it.
It Wrong verb form
recognise
jas
been a Correct your spelling
has
wesimce
I complained about my Correct your spelling
while since
bag
. However
, there is no reply from your side. I want full money back as per claim if you are unable to find my bag
.
I look forwand
to your speedy reply on Correct your spelling
forward
this
matter.
Yours Faithfully,
Ziva Shah.Submitted by kaverigoti2209 on
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Task Achievement
Pay more attention to spelling and typing, such as minor errors like 'writithis' instead of 'writing this', 'reqched' instead of 'reached', 'caroused' instead of 'carousel', and 'jas' instead of 'it has' which can hinder readability.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure the letter follows a clear and logical structure. Your paragraphs contain single ideas but could be better organized for a smoother flow. For example, the details of the incident and description of the bag should be in separate paragraphs.
Task Achievement
The letter addresses all required points: details of the incident, inquiry about the status of the bag, and what you want if the bag isn't found.
Task Achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and suitable for formal communication, which is important for task fulfillment.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately used, positively contributing to the overall tone of the letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.