Some people think an international car free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution.Others think there are more effective ways do to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In recent years,
air
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pollution
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is
increasing at an alarming rate. Wrong verb form
has been
While
some feel that an international Linking Words
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car free
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car-free
day
could reduce Use synonyms
the
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apply
air
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pollution
, I, Use synonyms
however
, agree with those who feel that other effective options can be used to reduce the polluted elements from Linking Words
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air
. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both sides and share my viewpoints with relevant examples.
On the one side, it could be argued that Add an article
the air
international
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International
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car free
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car-free
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day
can reduce Fix the agreement mistake
days
the
carbon footprints drastically. Supporters of Correct article usage
apply
this
trend believe that preventing the usage of personal cars for a Linking Words
day
could reduce the toxic elements from the earth, resulting in breathable Use synonyms
air
. Take Russia Use synonyms
for example
, where the government has reserved a Linking Words
day
for public transportation and Use synonyms
avoid
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avoids
usage
of personal cars. Correct article usage
the usage
This
trend has helped them in reducing their Linking Words
air
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pollution
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by
an unprecedented rate.
On the other side, I firmly believe that Change preposition
at
the
carpooling for everyday travel can make the Correct article usage
apply
air
quality better. Use synonyms
For instance
, if many people Linking Words
shares
a Change the verb form
share
car
for their daily commute, they could reduce the emission of toxic Use synonyms
air
significantly. Use synonyms
Moreover
, I Linking Words
also
feel that the government can promote Linking Words
this
trend by giving rebates to those Linking Words
car
owners who do carpooling. Use synonyms
For instance
, the Canadian government often give rebates to Linking Words
car
owners who travel with others.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
an international Linking Words
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car free
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car-free
day
can reduce the toxic Use synonyms
air
from the atmosphere, carpooling could be an Use synonyms
alternate
that can be used effectively. Replace the word
alternative
Therefore
, on balance, I strongly believe that we shouldn't limit Linking Words
to
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ourselves to
the
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apply
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car free
days to combat Add a hyphen
car-free
against
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apply
the
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apply
air
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pollution
.Use synonyms
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Try to provide more specific data or studies to support your claims about carpooling and international car free days.
coherence cohesion
Work on varying your sentence structure and avoid repetitive phrases such as 'toxic elements'.
task achievement
You have effectively addressed both perspectives of the argument.
coherence cohesion
Your essay includes a strong introduction and conclusion that frame your arguments well.
task achievement
You provided relevant examples to support your points, making your essay more convincing.