The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Two maps illustrate a current industrial area in Norbiton town and the planned future development of the area. There is a big change between now and the future.

Overall

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, constructors of

this

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industrial space are going to remove all factories and build new housing buildings and other facilities

such

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as playgrounds, schools, shops and medical centres.

Also

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, more roads will be constructed. There is a crossing river that

separated

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separates

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the town and the factory from the farmland. In the future, a new course will be built across the river.

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, there was only one round centre road in the city but a new round trail will be made below the original trail. Developers will get rid of 8 factory areas and build 7 new housing buildings,

in addition

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, one of the residual areas will be in the farmland space.

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, other facilities like shops and

hospital

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a hospital

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will be near the centre but

playground

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the playground

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and school, the places for children will be located right side of the city.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

167 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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