IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 6.5

The charts below show total British exports and the countries that Britain exports to. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show total British exports and the countries that Britain exports to. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#show #british #exports #countries #britain #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The table illustrates the five highest
UK
exports
 including cars, gold, turbojets, medication and crude oil in 2020 and the annual change in 2019. And below bar graph shows the portion of
UK
exports
 to the
EU
 from 2000 to 2020.
Overall
 except for medication products, the proportion of other
exports
 declined rapidly in 2020.
Also
, the percentage of
UK
exports
 sent to
EU
Correct article usage
the EU
show examples
 decreased steadily for 20 years. The feature that had the most rapid decline in export portion was crude oil, which dropped by 31.9% compared to 2019 and cars and turbojets followed next. Gold decreased
also
, but the percentage was 9.8%, which is smaller than other categories. The only thing that had increased was medication and it rose by 1.6%. So generally, exportation didn't go well in the
UK
 and
this
 tendency is shown in the bar graph
also
. In 2000, more than 50% of
UK
exports
was
Change the verb form
were
show examples
 sent to
EU
Correct article usage
the EU
show examples
however
, now in 2020 around 43% of
UK
exports
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
show examples
 sent to
EU
Correct article usage
the EU
show examples
.
Submitted by starmino0113 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, exports, eu with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
▼

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: