The charts below show total British exports and the countries that Britain exports to. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates the five highest

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exports

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including cars, gold, turbojets, medication and crude oil in 2020 and the annual change in 2019. And below bar graph shows the portion of

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exports

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to the

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from 2000 to 2020.

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except for medication products, the proportion of other

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declined rapidly in 2020.

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, the percentage of

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exports

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sent to

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the EU

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decreased steadily for 20 years. The feature that had the most rapid decline in export portion was crude oil, which dropped by 31.9% compared to 2019 and cars and turbojets followed next. Gold decreased

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, but the percentage was 9.8%, which is smaller than other categories. The only thing that had increased was medication and it rose by 1.6%. So generally, exportation didn't go well in the

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and

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tendency is shown in the bar graph

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. In 2000, more than 50% of

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was

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sent to

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the EU

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, now in 2020 around 43% of

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sent to

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the EU

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

167 words

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