The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides data about
car
ownership in Britain
on
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the period 1971 to 2007
Overall
it is clear that
the highest rate
people
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of people
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how
owner
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owned
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one
car
in British during the period 1971 to 2007 . According
what
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can be shown the period 1971 to 2007 highest average for ownership
people
how
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who
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has
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one
car
compared
the
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to the
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lowest figures
people
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for people
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how
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who
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had three or more cars . On the one
hands
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hand
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, the humans not have
car
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a car
the car
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at begin of
year
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the year
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increases
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figures the percentage 50% in 1971 compared to observed
declines
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decline
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marked for results
while
people
how
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who
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owners two
car
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cars
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the figures increased during different years by
approximately
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an approximately
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very
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a very
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large majority In
conclusion
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The line graph
depict
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depicts
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people
for
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apply
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using
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have
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the car
a car
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car
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cars
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in ownership and different
percentage
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percentages
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in
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apply
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for
catagous
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categories
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • stable
  • percentage
  • significant decline
  • increase
  • decrease
  • growth rate
  • category
  • notable
  • analyze
  • ownership
  • comparative analysis
  • general trend
  • highlight
  • focus on
  • comparison
  • significant change
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