The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides data about
car
ownership in Britain on
the period 1971 to 2007
Change preposition
in
Overall
it is clear that
the highest rate people
how Change preposition
of people
owner
one Replace the word
owned
car
in British during the period 1971 to 2007 .
According what
can be shown the period 1971 to 2007 highest average for ownership Change preposition
to what
people
how
Correct word choice
who
has
one Wrong verb form
had
car
compared the
lowest figures Change preposition
to the
people
Change preposition
for people
how
had three or more cars . On the one Correct word choice
who
hands
, the humans not have Fix the agreement mistake
hand
car
at begin of Add an article
a car
the car
year
Correct article usage
the year
increases
figures the percentage 50% in 1971 compared to observed Wrong verb form
increased
declines
marked for results Fix the agreement mistake
decline
while
people
how
owners two Correct word choice
who
car
the figures increased during different years by Change to a plural noun
cars
approximately
Add an article
an approximately
the approximately
very
large majority
In Correct article usage
a very
conclusion
The line graph Add a comma
conclusion,
depict
Change the verb form
depicts
people
for
Change preposition
apply
using
Verb problem
have
Add an article
the car
a car
car
in ownership and different Fix the agreement mistake
cars
percentage
Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
in
for Change preposition
apply
catagous
.Correct your spelling
categories
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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