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The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps
provides
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provide
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 the changes of a
school
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 during the period 1985 to
present
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the present
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 time.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 it can be shown the
school
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 now
change
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changed
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 and adding more features because
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school
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the school
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 population increased rate of students.
According to
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 what can be shown recently the
school
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 in 1985
sample
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sampled
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 the
class room
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classroom
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 specific . not had enough area experts and the population a very small number compared to
school
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 now adding many classrooms
such
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 as pool , computer room , learning resource centre and fitness centre. The population of students increased by approximately 2300. the roadway in
new
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the new
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school
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orgnized
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did
 not effect problems for students ,
principal
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principals
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 and teachers .
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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