You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The maps
provides
the changes of a Change the verb form
provide
school
during the period 1985 to present
time.
Correct article usage
the present
Overall
it is clear that
it can be shown the school
now change
and adding more features because Wrong verb form
changed
school
population increased rate of students.
Correct article usage
the school
According to
what can be shown recently the school
in 1985 sample
the Wrong verb form
sampled
class room
specific . not had enough area experts and the population a very small number compared to Correct your spelling
classroom
school
now adding many classrooms such
as pool , computer room , learning resource centre and fitness centre. The population of students increased by approximately 2300. the roadway in new
Correct article usage
the new
school
orgnized
not effect problems for students ,Correct your spelling
did
principal
and teachers .Fix the agreement mistake
principals
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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