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The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph and pie chart below
provides
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data on crime in the UK during the
last
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 year.
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 the male highest average for
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criminal conversations in the
uk
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UK
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the
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male
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 increased rate
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for
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the
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criminal conversations in the
uk
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 on the one
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,
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male
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very large majority.
duing
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hands
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 figures during the 20 age increased marked
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criminal conversations by approximately more
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percentage
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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