The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts represent data regarding global
water
use
distribution, and water
usage in two different country
.
Change to a plural noun
countries
Overall
, while
the greatest share of global water
consumption
was attributed to agricultural purposes, water
consumption
per person in Brazil owning a vast irrigated land is far higher than in the democratic republic of Congo
.
To commence with, although
all three types of consumption
increased over given
time, the agriculture portion with some 500 km3 in 1900 rocketed to over 3000 km3 in 2000. Correct article usage
a given
Moreover
, though industrial and domestic use
started at approximately the same level just around 50 in 1900, industrial use
surpassed the domestic category and reached About 1200 km3 in 2000, while
in the last
observed year, domestic use
never reached the initial given years of agricultural level.
On the other hand
, Brazil with 26500 irrigated land and 359 m3 of water
consumption
per person was over 80 times higher usage figure than Congo
, whereas
Congo
owned only 100km of Land. additionally
, Congo
's population was around a thirtieth of Brazil's population.Submitted by ali.homayoni93 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, consumption, congo, km with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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