The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.--DELETED LINK--
The line chart gives information about the number of people who had come to Burnaby Public Library to read books, from 2011 to 2014, that
has
been categorised into two genders.
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Overall
, we observe that since 2011 the number of individuals visiting this
place has been increasing. A similar trend was witnessed for men. But in the case of women after 2013, there was a drop in this
figure. Moreover
, before 2013, female readers were more compared to male
. Fix the agreement mistake
males
However
, after
this
period there was an opposite trend that was observed.
On closer examination, we find that in 2011, approximately 8000 people went to this
library to read books, of which close to 3000 were men. Interestingly, in 2013, the number of men and women who visited this
centre was the same, that is
10000. Later in 2014, for gents
Add a comma
gents,
this
increased to 14000, and for the other gender
it decreased by 3000.Add a comma
gender,
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