You should spend no more than 20 minutes on this task. This line graph shows the percentage of women who were employed in four countries from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

The line graph compares the proportion of women who worked in four countries, namely the USA,Korea,Afghanistan and France. As is illustrated by the graph,the female population who were job holders in the USA inclined gradually in 15 years from roughly 45% to 60%,

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experiencing a slight fall,standing at over 50%.

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,there was a small fluctuation in the rate of female workers in France,displaying a dip of 30% in 1990,

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rising steadily with a following level off at 50%.

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there was not a significant increase relating to female employment in France throughout the period from 1985 to 1995,a plunge was seen from approximately 35% to 10% in

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era after a peak reached in 1995 with about 35%.Regarding the female

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in the Japanese community,there was a moderate escalation between 1985 to 2005 from 20% to just above 30%.These figures can be considered as the smallest percentage variation throughout the years.

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,all countries except for Afghanistan witnessed a general upward trend.The highest percentage of employees who were female was observed in the USA,

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Afghanistan possessed the lowest contribution of women work holders in the society.