The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map provides information about the industrial
area
now and future development in the town of Norbiton.
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Overall
, Norbiton has transformed from a predominantly agricultural community to an urban centre with improved residential and commercial options.
Norbiton increase in buildings Linking Words
such
as a playground, schools, shops and medical centres will be constructed in the future. For the time being, there is a chain of factories running from the west to the east. In the future, the chain will be replaced by houses and different buildings. Linking Words
Additionally
, in the northern part will be constructed housing and in the east will be farmland, Linking Words
while
in the intermediary infrastructure will be a bridge over the river. Linking Words
Furthermore
, in the southern Linking Words
area
a smaller roundaboutUse synonyms
,
will split Remove the comma
apply
at the end
of the street. In the eastern Linking Words
area
schools and playgrounds, Use synonyms
while
shops and medical centres in the western Linking Words
area
.Use synonyms
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