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The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The 4 diverse pie charts compare data about the percentage of
men
 and women who are working in 3 various items in 2 Differents countries( A and
B
).
Overall
, most of the
people
 who are employed in A and
B
 regions work for Services, but the number of
people
 having a job in
this
 section in
country
B
 is more than in
country
 A.
According to
 the Male plot, most of the
people
 had service occupations because the figure of
men
 who worked in
this
 thing for district
B
 is 65% and A area had 11% less than
B
. The second section which
people
 like is
agriculture
 29% in
country
 A, but In
country
B
industry
 32% is the second
one
. The
last
one
 was
Industry
 in A
country
 where the figure is half of
secondly
;
moreover
,
Agriculture
 with 3% is not a popular career. The female diagrams show the important work in both countries are Services that in
country
 A has 49% and in
country
B
 has 24% more than
men
.
Agriculture
, which is the second thing in A region, has a 14% increase from
men
.
In addition
, for
country
B
 the proportion of
industry
 21% reduced from males. The third
one
 for A is
Industry
, which is the same as the first
one
, has 8%;
furthermore
, 1% of
Country
B
 female inhabitants prefer to do
Agriculture
.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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  • percentage
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  • employment trend
  • notable difference
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  • labor market
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