The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the
percentage
of women
participation
in senior management
in three companies which are Eldan Ltd
, Bamforth Ltd
and Finsbury
Ltd
between 1975 and 2015.
Overall
, all three companies experienced an increase in the percentage
participation
of women
in senior management
positions from 1975 to 2015. Although
Finsbury
Ltd
suffered a slight fall from 1975 to 1980 and 1990 to 2000. Furthermore
, senior management
positions are seen to be the most popular among women
who participated in the year of
2015, observed in all three companies.
Change preposition
apply
Firstly
, Eldan Ltd
had a percentage
participation
at
3% in 1975 which was maintained until 1980. The Change preposition
of
percentage
participation
then
grew steadily from 3% in 1980 to 33% in 2000. This
is then
followed by an increase of 31 percentage
points to 64%, reaching a peak in the year of 2015. This
results in an overall
increasing trend for Eldan Ltd
. Similarly
, Bamforth Ltd
faced a steady growth of 2 percentage
points in participation
every five years starting from 9% to 17% in 2000. It then
grew dramatically from 17% in 2000 to 46% in 2015.
Lastly
, despite an overall
increase in percentage
participation
in Finsbury
Ltd
, it still faced a slight decrease from 16% in 1975 to 14% in 1980. However
, after five years, it increased from 14% to 15%, also
climbing to 22% in 1990. In
1990 to 2000, Change preposition
From
Finsbury
Ltd
suffered a 2 percentage
point decrease from 22% to 20%. But in five years
time, it rose gradually from 20% to 26%, reaching the company’s highest Change noun form
years'
percentage
participation
of women
in senior management
positions.Submitted by cherrychan926 on
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