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The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the percentage of literate men and
women
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 across the five regions(Africa, Americas, Asia, Europe and
oceania
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).
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, it
also
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 provides the global aggregate of men and
women
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 who are literate.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 Europe has the most educated men and
women
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, 99.2 % and 98.5 respectively. The African continent had the lowest number of educated people in comparison to all other nations, at 62.5% literacy rate. In terms of male literacy,
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European males are the most educated, the Oceanics
second,
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the Americans
third,
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the Asians fourth, and Africans
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 position with 99.2%, 94.2%, 94.1%, 85.9% and 71.6% respectively. The Africans and Asians had the most
male to female
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male-to-female
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 disparity,
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with
difference
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differences
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 in literacy
rate
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rates
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 at about 20% and nearly 13% respectively. With respect to
women
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,
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Europe had the highest proportion of educated
women
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whereas
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, the American
women
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 were second most educated at 98.5 and 93.2% respectively. The African and Asian
women
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 were
significanlty
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 less educated compared to their
counter parts
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counterparts
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, at 53.9% and 72.5% respectively.
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