Many offenders commit more crimes after serving first punishment. Why is this happening? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is widely acknowledged that many

criminals

tend to be involved in more crimes after their

first

prison sentence.

This

phenomenon happened because of two major factors which are lack of

rehabilitation

and difficulty to find a

job

and the possible solution will be explained more in

this

essay.

First

,

rehabilitation

can be a key to guaranteeing a better future for

prisoners

however

not all

prisoners

have a good

rehabilitation

program

. Currently, not all prisons have good

rehabilitation

program

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programs

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that provide relevant skills and activities that are needed in

society

and jobs recently. The second reason is the difficulty of finding a

job

for offenders. Commonly, some jobs and societies do not accept

criminals

because they have some stereotype that offenders are bad people,

hence

they do not accept them as their employees.

Therefore

, there can be some reasons why

criminals

choose to

do

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crimes again after they get the

first

punishment.

However

, the problem can be solved with the support of the government and

society

.

First

,

prison

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prisons

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can create

rehabilitation

evaluation

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evaluations

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to create more programs that

suitable

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are suitable

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for

today

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world and enhance

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skill

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skills

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for

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of

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people in prison.

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,

society

such

as

community

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the community

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and company have give

a

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them a

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chance for criminal to be a better person

with

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creating

program

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that

involving

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prisoners

and

giving

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equal

opportunity

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opportunities

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for

job

opening for

prisoners

.

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, they can

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be actively

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actively

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in

society

and get a

joob

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job

to prevent

pepople

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people

with

crime

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a crime

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do

criminal

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criminals

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in the future.

To conclude

, many

criminals

involve

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commit

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crime

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crimes

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after

get

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initial punishment

due to

lack

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a lack

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of

rehabilitation

program

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programs

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and difficulty

find

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finding

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a

job

.

However

, with

supported

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support

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from government and the

society

such

as creating good

rehabilitation

program

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programs

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,

and

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apply

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involving them in

society

and equal

job

opportunity

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opportunities

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the issue can be tackled.