The line graph compares the average number of people in the UK traveling daily by car, bus and train over a period of 60 years.

The line graph compares the average number of people in the UK traveling daily by car, bus and train over a period of 60 years.
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The chart gives information about people who use a car, bus, and train for daily commute in U.K, from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
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, we observe that, since 1970, individuals using buses for everyday travel has reduced steadily.
However
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, from 1970-1980, and from 2000-2010, the number of citizens using cars was almost constant.
Apart from
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this
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, during the rest of the time the numbers showed an increment. A similar trend was observed for passengers travelling by train. On closer examination, it can seen that, in 1970, more than 3 million citizens of the United Kingdom preferred to travel by bus. But
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this
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period the passenger number started dropping, and
finally
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, in 2030,
this
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figure was close to 3,000,000.
In addition
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to
this
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, in 1980, nearly 5 million used a personal car for the daily commute, and 2 million travelled by Rail,
after
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this
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it increased and reached 7,000,000 and 3,000,000 respectively, in 2000. Later again in 2010,
this
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started rising, and by the end of 2030, 13,000,000 citizens were either using a four-wheeler or a train.
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