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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is argued that
students
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 who are studying with classmates in educational institutions have more advantages than those who are using
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distance
 learning at
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 statement because schooling prepares
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 with good
skills
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 and moral values, and studying with their tutors in person has many benefits.
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, Schooling equips
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 with prime
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 and moral values.
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, when
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 go to school, they must meet different people that improves their communication
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, each school prepares
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 to be good citizens, by teaching them moral values
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 and
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, a recent study
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 Um Al-Qura University found that there was a huge
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 between
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 who studied at schools and other peers who studied at
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, the first group had better
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 than
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 group. Having classes in person provides
students
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 with viable help
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This
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 makes
students
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 learn effectively their subjects because they can find their teachers quickly.
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, the worst thing about
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 at
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 is many
students
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 make their
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 by AI which is unfair. For
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, a recent survey illustrated that many
students
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' assignments were done by Chat GPT. In conclusion, it is said that learning at
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better
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 than studying online at
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 because educational institutions prepare
students
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 with good communication
skills
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 and strong moral
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.
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, studying in person helps
students
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 to reach their teachers easily and improves their outcomes,
while
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 people who learning
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who
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usually use AI to solve their homework which is unfair.

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coherence
Ensure that your main points are clearly separated into paragraphs to improve readability and coherence.
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Refine your examples to be more detailed and directly related to your arguments.
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Pay attention to minor grammatical errors and typos to enhance clarity.
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The essay provides a clear stance on the topic, agreeing with the statement.
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You have used relevant examples to support your main points in the essay.
coherence
The essay includes an introduction and a conclusion, effectively framing your arguments.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Collaborative learning
  • Debate
  • Discipline
  • Engagement
  • Feedback loop
  • Peer support
  • Educational resources
  • Adaptive learning
  • Self-motivation
  • Independent study
  • Digital literacy
  • Virtual classroom
  • Accessibility
  • E-learning
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