The line graph compares the average number of people in the UK traveling daily by car, bus and train over a period of 60 years.

The line graph compares the average number of people in the UK traveling daily by car, bus and train over a period of 60 years.
The line graph demonstrates the average quantity of commuters in a specific country travelling daily by three different types of transport (the bus, the
car
, and the
train
)
in
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1970 to 2030.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
train
and the
car
experienced an upward trend over the whole timeline,
while
the bus saw a decline. In the first 40 years, the number of passengers on the
train
gradually rose to 3% from the rate of about 2%,
while
the number of
car
users insignificantly increased until 1980 and climbed to a slight 7% in 2000.
Furthermore
, from 2000 to 2010, both the users of the
car
and the
train
stabilized, and
then
dramatically grew to around 9% and 5%, respectively,
last
period of time.
Subsequently
, the bus steadily plummeted to 3%, in 2030, from about the rate of 4%
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commuters, which is observed as the lowest number of people, in 1970.
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