The line graph compares the average number of people in the UK traveling daily by car, bus and train over a period of 60 years.

The line graph compares the average number of people in the UK traveling daily by car, bus and train over a period of 60 years.
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The line graph demonstrates the average quantity of commuters in a specific country travelling daily by three different types of transport (the bus, the
car
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, and the
train
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)
in
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1970 to 2030.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
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and the
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experienced an upward trend over the whole timeline,
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the bus saw a decline. In the first 40 years, the number of passengers on the
train
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gradually rose to 3% from the rate of about 2%,
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the number of
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users insignificantly increased until 1980 and climbed to a slight 7% in 2000.
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, from 2000 to 2010, both the users of the
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and the
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stabilized, and
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dramatically grew to around 9% and 5%, respectively,
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period of time.
Subsequently
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, the bus steadily plummeted to 3%, in 2030, from about the rate of 4%
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commuters, which is observed as the lowest number of people, in 1970.
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