The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram describes
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the procedures for Uranium to make atomic energy .
Overall
, the
process
consists of six steps.
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includes a recycling stage in between . At first , Uranium is mined from the ground and turned into pellets in the next stage . During
this
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it is enriched to U-235.
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enriched fuel pellets power the generators to produce electricity . Their efficiency lasts for up to four
years
. After 4
years
of
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these pellets become nuclear waste . The ineffective fuel is managed in two ways . Some of it is re-processed and re-used to repeat the
process
for another 4 more
years
.
whereas
the waste fuel which cannot be utilised again is stored in containers and buried . To summarise , the
process
of Uranium usage for nuclear energy consists of six steps from mining to dumping .It can be used
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to four
years
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energy and can be partly reused
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nuclear fission
  • Radioactive material
  • Reactor core
  • Control rods
  • Coolant
  • Thermal energy
  • Steam generator
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Spent fuel
  • Radioactive waste
  • Depleted uranium
  • Decommissioning
  • Sustainable energy
  • Nuclear proliferation
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