The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram describes
about
the procedures for Uranium to make atomic energy . Remove the preposition
apply
Overall
, the process
consists of six steps. This
includes a recycling stage in between .
At first , Uranium is mined from the ground and turned into pellets in the next stage . During this
process
it is enriched to U-235. Add a comma
process,
This
enriched fuel pellets power the generators to produce electricity . Their efficiency lasts for up to four Correct determiner usage
These
years
. After 4 years
of use
these pellets become nuclear waste .
The ineffective fuel is managed in two ways . Some of it is re-processed and re-used to repeat the Add a comma
use,
process
for another 4 more years
. whereas
the waste fuel which cannot be utilised again is stored in containers and buried .
To summarise , the process
of Uranium usage for nuclear energy consists of six steps from mining to dumping .It can be used up
to four Change preposition
for up
years
for producing
energy and can be partly reusedChange preposition
to produce
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