The line graph compares the average number of people in the UK traveling daily by car, bus and train over a period of 60 years.
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report, we are going to compare the average number of people in the UK travelling daily by car , bus and train over the past 60 years. I would like to start with the car from what we can see back in 1970 it was the lowest one compared to 2000 and 2023 , it started to rise in 1980 and never stopped since it kept getting higher and higher and the car ended up being the highest of them all. Linking Words
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we take a look at the bus we can see that it started kind of high but sadly had a huge drop making it the lowest transport by the year 2023. Linking Words
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, the train had a rough start it started by being so low even the lowest transport back in 1970 and it stayed that way until 2010 it had gained a great rise.Linking Words
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