The diagrams below show the process of making chocolate. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures illustrate how to turn chocolate pods into liquid chocolate that can be consumed.
Overall
, there are six steps that are conducted outside the mill
and four steps that are conducted inside the mill
.
Firstly
, it begins with the processes outside the mill
which started by picking the ripe red pods from the cacao trees that grow in South America, Africa and Indonesia. The next step is
the pods were harvested and the white cocoa beans
inside were taken. Then
, the beans
are fermented and spread in the sun to dry. After that, the dried beans
were put into the large sacks and were transported to the factory by train or lorry.
The next processes were conducted inside the mill
. Following
this
, the dried beans
were roasted in the oven at a temperature of around 350 degrees Celcius. Next,
the roasted cacao beans
were crushed by the machine and the outer shell was removed. The last
, the inner part of the beans
was pressed by the machine and the liquid chocolate was produced.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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