Many believe that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I believe that increasing the
price
of
fuel
is a
way
to solve some
environemental
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environmental
problems
, but not the best
way
to solve all the environmental
problems
. Environmental
problems
include air pollution,
lost
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of natural
habit
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habitat
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for wildlife animals, water pollution, limited space of landfills, and others. These environmental
problems
could cause decreasing
of
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in
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biodiversity, worsening the problem of global warming, and reducing the speed of restoring natural resources. Extreme weather
such
as floodings, droughts or typhoons
then
occur more
frequent
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, destroy more
artifacts
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artefacts
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,
cause
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and cause
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more injuries and deaths. Increasing the
price
of
fuel
may be a solution
of
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to
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preventing natural
habitat
lost
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loss
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.
Fuel
is a kind of fossil
fuel
which can only be found underground.
Surface
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of the land like trees
have
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to be removed for harvesting the
fuel
, which causes the
lost
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loss
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of
habitat
for wildlife animals,
also
the original
habitat
is difficult to
be restored
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.
According to
economic theories, increasing the
price
of
fuel
can reduce the amount of
fuel
used, so as to reduce the frequency of destroying
the
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apply
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nature for underground
fuel
.
However
, adding the
fuel
price
may only decrease the amount of
fuel
used in
short
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term. Since hot waves occur frequently, demand for air-conditioners
increases
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rapidly in recent years.
Price
control may not be able to decrease the usage of fuels significantly.
Instead
, increasing the amount of generating renewable resources,
such
as solar energy, wind energy, etc., can be a
way
to reduce the natural
habitat
lost
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loss
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. When more renewable resources are generated, lower
fuel
is needed,
therefore
, the need for harvesting fossil fuels is reduced. The speed of losing natural
haitat
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habitat
habitats
can be lowered.
To sum up
, increasing the
price
of
fuel
may be a solution for lowering the speed of natural
habitat
lost
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loss
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,
whereas
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but
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it is not the best nor only
way
to solve the environmental problem.
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