The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar graph shows the imprisonment
rate
in five
countries
- Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, the US, and Canada
- over five
decades
from 1930 to 1980. Overall
, it can be seen that Canada
had the highest number
of prisoners
in 1930 while
Great Britain had the least. However
, after 50 years, the figure for incarceration decreased in Canada
and the US accounted for the greatest number
of prisoners
.
To begin
with, in 1930, the number
of prisoners
in Canada
stood at 120 thousand
, which was the highest among the other countries
. This
number
, however
, fluctuated over the five
decades
, hitting a low of approximately 80 thousand
in 1970. At the end
of the period, the number
of inmates in Canada
reached just below 100 thousand
. Moreover
, Great Britain showed the lowest value at the beginning of the period (around 25 thousand
in 1930). This
figure rose gradually over time, ending the period at 80 thousand
prisoners
.
On the other hand
, the number
of prisoners
in the US and New Zealand was equal (100 thousand
) in 1930. It is evident that over the following decades
, there was a large gap between the Imprsonmate rate
in these two countries
, and they experienced an opposing trend. At the end
of the five
decades
, the imprisonment rate
in the US became the highest number
among all countries
. In Addition
, a glance at the graph provided shows some striking similarities between the imprisonment rate
pattern of Australia and New Zealand. However
, in 1980, the number
of inmates in Australia decreased noticeably to roughly 50 thousand
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