The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar graph shows the imprisonment
rate
in Use synonyms
five
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countries
- Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, the US, and Use synonyms
Canada
- over Use synonyms
five
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decades
from 1930 to 1980. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
Canada
had the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
prisoners
in 1930 Use synonyms
while
Great Britain had the least. Linking Words
However
, after 50 years, the figure for incarceration decreased in Linking Words
Canada
and the US accounted for the greatest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
prisoners
.
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To begin
with, in 1930, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
prisoners
in Use synonyms
Canada
stood at 120 Use synonyms
thousand
, which was the highest among the other Use synonyms
countries
. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
number
, Use synonyms
however
, fluctuated over the Linking Words
five
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decades
, hitting a low of approximately 80 Use synonyms
thousand
in 1970. Use synonyms
At the end
of the period, the Linking Words
number
of inmates in Use synonyms
Canada
reached just below 100 Use synonyms
thousand
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Great Britain showed the lowest value at the beginning of the period (around 25 Linking Words
thousand
in 1930). Use synonyms
This
figure rose gradually over time, ending the period at 80 Linking Words
thousand
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prisoners
.
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On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
prisoners
in the US and New Zealand was equal (100 Use synonyms
thousand
) in 1930. It is evident that over the following Use synonyms
decades
, there was a large gap between the Imprsonmate Use synonyms
rate
in these two Use synonyms
countries
, and they experienced an opposing trend. Use synonyms
At the end
of the Linking Words
five
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decades
, the imprisonment Use synonyms
rate
in the US became the highest Use synonyms
number
among all Use synonyms
countries
. Use synonyms
In Addition
, a glance at the graph provided shows some striking similarities between the imprisonment Linking Words
rate
pattern of Australia and New Zealand. Use synonyms
However
, in 1980, the Linking Words
number
of inmates in Australia decreased noticeably to roughly 50 Use synonyms
thousand
.Use synonyms
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