The table below gives the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 avout one university. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given information depicts the outcomes of examinations in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university.
Overall
, the data indicates the percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of an
university for every 5 Change the article
a
year
. Change to a plural noun
years
Additionally
, two aspects such
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apply
a
technological quality and print resources show a slight rise and fall, Correct article usage
apply
whereas
electronic resources present a dramatic growth, but building
remains the same trend Add an article
the building
in
every 5 Change preposition
apply
year
. Change to a plural noun
years
However
, range
of modules Correct article usage
the range
represent
a gradual drop.
The first aspect outlines that in 2000 it was 65% but in 2005 it decreased Change the verb form
represents
for
63% and in 2010 increased Change preposition
to
for
69%. The second one first jumped Change preposition
to
for
2% from 87 to 89, Change preposition
by
then
reduced for
1%. The Change preposition
by
last
item, teaching facilities show
no change Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
at
every half Change preposition
apply
decades
, it remained unchanged Change to a singular noun
decade
77
%.
Change preposition
at 77
However
, the third and forth
aspects outline significant changes. The third aspect, electronic resources, saw a significant rise, from 45% in 2000 to 72% in 2005, reaching 88% in 2010. Correct your spelling
fourth
This
highlights major improvements in this
area. Conversely
, the range of modules offered declined from 32% in 2000 to 30% in 2005, and further
to 27% in 2010, indicating decreasing student satisfaction with module variety.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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