The table below gives the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 avout one university. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 avout one university.

Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given information depicts the outcomes of examinations in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university.
Overall
, the data indicates the percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of
an
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university for every 5
year
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.
Additionally
, two aspects
such
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a
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technological quality and print resources show a slight rise and fall,
whereas
electronic resources present a dramatic growth, but
building
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remains the same trend
in
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every 5
year
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.
However
,
range
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the range
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of modules
represent
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a gradual drop. The first aspect outlines that in 2000 it was 65% but in 2005 it decreased
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63% and in 2010 increased
for
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69%. The second one first jumped
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2% from 87 to 89,
then
reduced
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1%. The
last
item, teaching facilities
show
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no change
at
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every half
decades
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, it remained unchanged
77
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%.
However
, the third and
forth
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aspects outline significant changes. The third aspect, electronic resources, saw a significant rise, from 45% in 2000 to 72% in 2005, reaching 88% in 2010.
This
highlights major improvements in
this
area.
Conversely
, the range of modules offered declined from 32% in 2000 to 30% in 2005, and
further
to 27% in 2010, indicating decreasing student satisfaction with module variety.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "outlines" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • teaching quality
  • facilities
  • student satisfaction
  • support services
  • trends
  • ratings
  • infrastructure
  • utilization rates
  • feedback
  • university policies
  • available services
  • evolution
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • analyzing
  • overview
  • discussing
  • exploring
  • examining
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