The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given material demonstrates the floor plan transition of a public library in the past and at present.
Overall
, the library’s structure didn’t change significantly.
However
, there are some shifts in the sections. The library became more sophisticated and modern.
First,
right forward to the entrance, there were two circle tables and chairs in the past which are empty now.
Then
, let’s look at it more closely from the computer area of today’s library with a clockwise direction. In the past, the computer
room
was a reading
room
with newspapers and magazines, and we can find that the location of the door changed.
Moreover
, the place for Children’s fiction
books
today incorporating the additional function to the
room
was the area for the CDs, videos and computer games in the past.
As a result
, it became larger which led to the space between the two rooms becoming less spacious.
In addition
, the rooms for children’s
books
were replaced
to
Change preposition
with
show examples
the
room
for lectures.
Also
, the Enquiry desk turned into the café. The place between these two areas changed from just displaying adult non-fiction
books
to adult fiction
books
, an information desk and Self-service machines which came to include the function of the past Enquiry desk.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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