The chart below shows the number of international applicants to the universities of one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given chart illustrates the number of international attendances at
universities
in a European
nation.
It can be seen that China
and America both hold the most significant figures. Moreover
, the tiniest statistic belonged to Russia
.
In 2004, there were around 27000 Chinese students who applied to universities
in a European
country while
the figure for Russian was 2500. Plus, there were roughly 13000 applicants
from the USA which is 6000 bigger than it is from Japan
. In the next year, applicants
from China
decreased to 23000 which is 8000 higher than those from the US. Meanwhile, the figure for Russia
was 2000 and Japan
remained stable.in 2006, there was equality in participation in universities
of one European
nation from China
and the USA (around 17000). There were 2500 Russian students who attended universities
which is 4500 less than Japan
.
In the next year, a European
nation witnessed 23000 applicants
from the US to the universities
which is 4000 huger than China
while
participants for Russia
were around 2000. Additionally
, there were nearly 10000 Japanese students who went to universities
in one European
area. In the year after,
the number of applicants
from the US was 27000 which is one of the highest figures in the chart while
statistics for China
were slightly higher than 15000. In addition
, there were 2700 attendances from Russia
which is 7300 smaller than Japan
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