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the percentages of harmful waste management methods in

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countries shown.

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method in these countries.

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, in the Republic of Korea recycling

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most popular, meanwhile The UK does not use

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of Korea the main part or to be more precise 69

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of waste passes through recycling

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22% and the

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one - incineration, with 9%. The situation is

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for Sweden, where of the country's 55% is undergrounding,25% is recycling and 20% of waste passes with incineration

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the pie chart, in The UK incineration took the

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top with only 2%,

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, and other mentioned methods are 8%

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