The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of  educational setting in the UK in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the distribution of male and female educators employed in six different educational sectors in the UK in the year 2010.
Overall
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it is clear that
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female staff is heavily concentrated in Nursery and Primary School categories. The universities are the only educational sector where male teachers are dominant. In terms of female staff, a significant proportion of female teachers were employed in both Nursing schools and Primary schools, and at a proportion of almost 100% in both sectors
whereas
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the males contributed around 3% only.
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, in college, the proportions for both of them were nearly equal
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the women surpassed with a roughly 10% margin in secondary schools.
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, if we look at the percentage of males employed, the number of male teachers remained significantly lower in numbers in almost all the fields, but, a higher number of men were employed in private institutes and universities(about 45% and nearly 70% respectively).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • educational setting
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • nursery school
  • higher education
  • proportion
  • outnumber
  • trend
  • comparison
  • historical factors
  • social influence
  • teaching profession
  • data interpretation
  • balance
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