The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in the European country between 1979 and 2004.
The provided line graph illustrates the
consumption
of meat
and sea products in selected European country
between 1979 and 2004.
Fix the agreement mistake
countries
Overall
, all meat
types such
as beef, lamb, and fish faced a significant decline, except the chicken
products which showed an upward trend. The indicators are noted in grams per person
per week
.
Beef consumption
experienced a fluctuating but overall
declining trend. Initially
the most consumed meat
at about 220 g
per person
per week
, it’s
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its
consumption
dropped sharply around the mid of
1980s, with a notable decline in the late 1980s and early 1990s. By 2004, beef Change preposition
apply
consumption
had fallen to around 100 g
per person
per week
. Fish consumption
remained relatively stable throughout the period with a slight decrease to 50 g
in 2004..
From 1979 to 2004 , Replace the punctuation
.
...
chicken
consumption
increase
significantly. It started at about 150 Change the verb form
increases
g
in 1979 and rose steadily, surpassing all other types of meat
by the early 1990s. By 2004, chicken
consumption
had reached approximately 250 g
per person
per week
. Starting at about 150 g
, on the same level as chicken
consumption
, lamb consumption
declined steadily over the 25-year period. it fell to almost 60 g
by 2004.Submitted by zerdeteacher2024 on
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